NaPoWriMo: Day 16 – Wouldn’t Change a Thing

Day 16 of the Poetry Writing Challenge, was to write a letter- poem. A poem similar to letter writing. It could be in the form of a letter to a person, place or thing or in the form of a back and forth correspondence.

 

Thanks to the challenge, I drafted the one below .Was an opportunity to rekindle the past.

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My dearest darling,

 

It’s been a while,

Two decades and a quart to be precise,

It’s funny how quickly time flies,

And you’re still the reason behind my smile.

 

The past still fresh, with closed eyes, I see,

As strangers we met, in a far away land,

Frightened and unaware of the future planned,

Of destiny’s mysterious, sweet conspiracy.

 

Classmates, friends we happened to be,

Oblivious and untrusting of the way ahead,

Was it the blind heart that had ruled or the mighty  head?

I can’t tell, for what is, was, what was meant to be.

 

For not a thing in the world, would I trade,

The laughter, the tears, the dreams or the fears,

The doubts, the cheers or the difficult years,

Entwined into a weave so rare, so precious, made.

 

If ever, I had to go back again, to that far away land,

Where two paths crossed and a journey began,

I would take the same turn and follow the same plan,

Every hurdle, every trouble, now I’d fearlessly withstand.

 

I’d make the same choices over and over again,

No changes, no alterations, no makeover,

I’d tread the same path that leads to you again,

My darling, my friend, my soulmate forever.

 

Yours Forever & Ever,

 

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18 responses to “NaPoWriMo: Day 16 – Wouldn’t Change a Thing”

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  2. orangeorchards Avatar

    Great words! 💙

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you😊

  3. nicolahulmeblog Avatar

    Beautiful words once again x

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thx Nicola😊

  4. Archana Avatar
    Archana

    Wow..God bless u both !

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Archana. Same to you too😊

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      It’s beautifully tragic. I believe in hope and positivity so the end is not something I can relate to. I like the concept of the shore.
      Thanks for asking for my opinion:)

      1. feelovibes Avatar

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      2. feelovibes Avatar

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  5. viewsofpreethib Avatar

    Wow Smitha, a beautiful poem and god bless you both 🙂 <3

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Preethi for the blessings. God bless you too☺

      1. viewsofpreethib Avatar

        Thank you Smitha, hope i find my soulmate soon 😉

        1. Smitha V Avatar

          May your wish come true and when it does let me know 🙂

          1. viewsofpreethib Avatar

            Aww Thank you, sure Smitha 🙂

  6. Cara Hartley Avatar

    This is beautiful. I’m glad you found such a love to spend your life with!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Cara. It just made the downs so much more easier and the highs more fun. I am grateful to the Lord!

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