NaPoWriMo : Day 25 – The Poetics of Space – The Little Corner Room

National Poetry Writing Day 25 challenge is to write a poem called “The Poetics of Space”, about the emotional relationship that people have with particular kind of spaces- the insides of sea shells, drawers, nooks and all various parts of the house. Any space will do – so long as it is small, definite and meaningful to you.

The prompt brought back memories of the three years I spent in my grandmother’s house. The little corner room was my home away from home- it allowed me to look at the world outside while remaining hidden from the outside. It was my haven- where I laughed and cried, celebrated wins and bruised myself back after a loss. Three decades after moving away, the room remains the same with everything just as I left it.

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In the sprawling old house,

That was my grandmother’s,

Was a cozy, corner room, that was mine.

Rose bushes lined it’s eastern wall,

Reached up-to it’s windows,

And filled it with a pure, sweet, smell.

 

Four little windows on this wall,

Overlooked- the wrought -iron gate in the front,

A narrow road and the village school across.

The other two windows on the adjacent side,

Had  a view of the gardens and the fields beyond,

The neighbor’s cows, the clucking hens and the community’s main well.

 

Shaded by an old guava tree and hidden by a jutting wall,

And branches of plants, growing tangled and wild,

Unnoticed it went, from an outsider’s eye.

Hours I’d spend here, away from all,

Tucked away, in a world of my own,

Dreaming dreams, weaving tales, that made me smile.

 

A table small, lay in the corner,

A bangle stand, a red alarm clock and an old record player,

A drawer full of greeting cards and walls covered with art,

A brown, wooden cupboard, covered with bright, colorful stickers,

A full length mirror and teenage posters,

That screamed, “My Room, My Space. Stick to the barrier!”.

 

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10 responses to “NaPoWriMo : Day 25 – The Poetics of Space – The Little Corner Room”

  1. […] had written a poem on space for a previous NaPoWriMo The little corner room and I was tempted to use it this year too but today I feel […]

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  3. nicolahulmeblog Avatar

    I love the lines
    “Shaded by an old guava tree and hidden by a jutting wall,
    And branches of plants, growing tangled and wild,”
    Beautiful imagery x

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Nicola. Xoxo

  4. Archana Avatar
    Archana

    Beautifully written smitha..almost had a peek in your cozy lil corner..keep up the good work dear ..u hv done a marvelous job..another 5 days to go..

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much Archana…cozy it was, my escape from reality. Yes…5 days to go. Thanks for staying with me and pushing me to finish line😊

  5. viewsofpreethib Avatar

    Lovely write Smitha <3 each poem makes me know a little more about you… So beautifully narrated…. <3

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Preethi. 😘. “Each poem makes me know a little more about you” …dont know if that’s a good thing right? As always thanks for the positive feedback.

      1. viewsofpreethib Avatar

        Yup Smitha not sure if it is good thing… But maybe good, only when it comes to me 😉 hahaha 😀

        1. Smitha V Avatar

          😀

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