Just want to say…Thank you for holding on…Love you forever…

 

On Day 17 of the NaPoWriMo challenge, we had to write a poem that could easily be turned into a song. I had written NaPoWriMo : Day 17- The Night’s My Refuge

When I wrote the poem “End the farce”End the Farce… “, someone commented saying holding on sometimes was more difficult than letting go, to which I replied, I agree. Holding On and Letting Go are equally important but one just needs to know when to hold on and when to let go.

I wrote another one today based on Holding on, which I believe could be made into a song. Let me know what you’ll think. Any singers, aspiring music writers in the group, you’re welcome to try it out. Would love to hear it, if you try.

 

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Just want to say,

Thank you…

For not letting go,

When we had a row,

For holding on,

When I was gone,

For sticking around,

When we were unbound,

 

Just want to say,

Love you…

For a faith so strong,

That saw no wrong,

For just being there,

When I did not care ,

For believing in “us”,

When I felt love was such a fuss.

 

Just want to say,

Thank you…

For the journey so far,

I so thank my star,

For helping me see,

I and you were meant to be,

For everything you did, it seems,

I got to live my dreams…

 

Just want to say,

Love you…

For not giving up,

When all I ever wanted was a  break-up,

For not turning your back,

When to walk away, I had such a knack,

For not listening to me,

When a part of your life, I did not want to be…

 

Just want to say,

Thank you…

For a love so true,

Just want to say,

Love you…

For I see now, I belong with you,

Just want to say…

Just want to say…

Love you Forever, Hold on forever,

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11 responses to “Just want to say…Thank you for holding on…Love you forever…”

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  2. viewsofpreethib Avatar

    Beautiful write Smitha.. I hope we get to hear someone sing this beautiful piece.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Preethi😊 Me too! Did not hear from you since a long time. Hope all well

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      1. viewsofpreethib Avatar

        All well dear, thank you… Just been offline for sometime.

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  3. Feelings and Freedom Avatar

    Wonderful!! Simply awesome! I am sure music will add wings to this piece!

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Aww…you’re too sweet Vandana.Thank you so much. Looks like we have no music writers in the group. It would have been fun to hear it as a song.

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  4. Anoynomous Avatar

    I am glad I could inspire you to write this .

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      I am glad you visited the blog again to read this poem…and I hope I did justice to holding on as I had for letting go.

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Thank you😊

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  5. thebackyardpoet Avatar

    Beautifully written

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