Indelible Impressions…

via Daily Prompt: Impression

Wrote a Senryu poem on the prompt “Impression”. A Senryu like a Haiku follows 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables but focuses on humans and not on nature.

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Was it what you said,

Was it what you did, but you-

Left behind a mark.

 

Was it how you looked?

Or was it your voice, that I-

Just could not erase.

 

Or was it a touch,

So strong, so gentle, made an-

Indelible Impression.

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13 responses to “Indelible Impressions…”

  1. calmkate Avatar

    beautifully said 🙂

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Kate😊

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        a pleasure … have unfollowed most as I go off air within the week but hope to read more of yours when I return in December 🙂

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Wow that’s a long break. Have a good one! Will miss you. Look forward to hearing from you in December😊

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          1. calmkate Avatar

            may have an opportunity to make a couple of posts but will turn my comments off 🙂

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  2. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    Lovely use of the prompt 🙂

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much. You made my day😊

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  3. viewsofpreethib Avatar

    Beautiful write, loved every word… Wow ❤

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Preethi. It’s been a long time.

      Like

  4. S Keraleeyan Avatar

    Short, Crispy n Sweet. Loved it.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you and welcome back after a long time😊

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  5. NS Avatar

    Every line is so lovable and so felt 😍
    In awe of it 😍
    Amazingly titled 😅

    Do check my world of blogs too 😃

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you. I am glad you loved it.😊 Will definitely check out your blog too.

      Like

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