Carpe Diem #1253 : A Thousand Candles

Seeing the picture provided today as part of Carpe-Diem challenge, brought back a vivid memory of a little girl I had seen on the street, in Hoi An, Vietnam. Have posted a picture of her (at the end), though not as clear as the one provided in the challenge. Seeing the picture will help you understand why the words for the Haibun flowed so easily. A Haibun is a literary composition that combines prose and poetry. The range of haibun is broad and includes, but is not limited to, the following forms of prose :autobiography, biography, diary, essay, history, prose poem, short story and travel literature.

The picture provided below by Chèvrefeuille, is one from Tumblr’s “AvaZenGarden”

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Thousand candles – Photographer unknown

As we walked around the streets of Hoi An, passing Chinese styled pagodas, streets covered with colorful lanterns, French styled coffee shops ,yellow painted walls, shops where women bent over needles stitching the most intricate wedding gowns, it seemed so far away from the city life we knew and yet it was real, as real as us. As beautiful as the colorful street was or the music of the flute that came from one of the concerts on the streets filled the air, we had no idea how the place would transform when dusk set it. We turned around as it started getting dark to head back to our vehicle after a day’s trip to Hoi An and lo and behold!, we witnessed an ethereal transformation of the streets that we had just meandered.

A thousand lights shone,

glowing stars lighting the dark night,

On the streets, in the waters…

As we stood mesmerized by the beauty of it all, absorbing the glow of every candle lit; in awe of the beauty of thousands of candles lit, we saw dozens of road-side hawkers selling flower lanterns to passers-by who bought them, made a wish for health, for love, for fortune and set them free in the bobbing waters.

Then there in their midst,

I saw a child, eyes wide,

Crouching, she looked up…

Her face lit, by the candles that she had lighted and awaited to sell to romantics who believed in luck or to enthralled tourists who wished to leave no stone unturned in the name of experience or to kind strangers who wished to bring a smile to a child in a distant land

A warm, mellow glow,

Pale skin, softly radiant,

Vision Divine…

I tried to freeze the sight that lay before me – so pure, so innocent; a face that brightly cut through the darkness like a thousand candles, but my ordinary camera could not capture that which to my eyes was revealed. Even as I write these words, I close my eyes to relive that fleeting moment and my eyes thankfully do not desert me.

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19 responses to “Carpe Diem #1253 : A Thousand Candles”

  1. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    This is full of atmosphere Smitha, I can see everything from the women with their needles, to the lights and the child’s face – full of light 🙂

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Its so good to hear you could feel everything sitting so far away. It means the post has done justice. Thank you so much☺.

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  2. milan rajkumar Avatar

    Ah ! This is really touching ! You are awesome !

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Milan for commenting. Your words are encouraging🙂. Do check out the rest of my Haikus ( if you have the time) and let me know what you think.

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      1. milan rajkumar Avatar

        Sure Smitha , I am about to !!!

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Wow! You actually kept your word. I am ever so grateful. Thank you!

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          1. milan rajkumar Avatar

            Why ….do others say such things and do not do their parts . ? Haha

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          2. Smitha V Avatar

            😊Oh yes, they do!

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  3. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Splendid post, Smitha and the pictures were so apt with your beautiful write up and poem. Great.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much Kamal for your positive words, so encouraging. I hope I did justice to the picture.

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Welcome Smitha and yes definitely you did so well and such beautiful picture of that girl lighting the diya. Too good.

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Thanks Kamal. Your words mean a lot. Seriously!

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          1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

            So sweet Smitha, I am feeling so happy hearing these compliments but on a serious note what are we all taking with us, nothing so why not make others happy and in return we too are happy isnt it. So you have a wonderful day Smitha and blessings to you from the One who knows us all.

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          2. Smitha V Avatar

            Your blog is perfectly titled and suits your kindness. Glad to know you virtually😊

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          3. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

            Thanks Smitha for your kind words and so true all blessings from the One and Only Lord who knows us all and boundlessly blesses each and everyone in this world. Have a great day and it is so nice to know you too.

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          4. Smitha V Avatar

            Wishing you a wonderful day too!

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