I’ll walk to the end of the earth with you

via Daily Prompt: Loyal

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Dear Stranger,

I may be unfriendly,

You may find me distant,

I may be bossy,

You may find me arrogant…

I may be prudent,

You may find me doubting,

I may be upfront,

You may find me frustrating…

Little snippets here and there,

A story we write together,

One stitch at a time, I’ll weave every tear-

A bond I’ll deftly make – every storm to weather…

A promise I’ll make, if I give you my trust,

It’ll be forever,

I’ll stand by you through your worst,

And make excuses when you waver…

If I give you my heart,

I’ll not look back; no matter the bend,

And if ever our paths, one day, do part,

I’ll wait for you at the journey’s end. ..

Love,

A loyal friend

27 responses to “I’ll walk to the end of the earth with you”

Fortunately Human

October 28, 2017

It was the greatest dedication I can experience…that too it was for a stranger…from a …to be friend….great…. I hope it ended with that…. I am still seeing words lying here and there after that….is it my system…that is showing me those pieces…?

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 28, 2017
  
  It starts with a stranger, any stranger…who I would take a long time to to trust. But once that is done…then even if the person falters and our paths do separate, I wouldn’t forget the good times or the good done. Will not turn everything of the past black just because of the present differences…have I filled in the missing pieces 🙂
  
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  1. Fortunately Human
    
    October 28, 2017
    
    Yes you did….looks like a typical Scorpio….but yes….this type of character trait is unique though awesome….reading this comment…feels as if looking at the mirror…..
    
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    1. Smitha V
      
      October 28, 2017
      
      Thank you so much…It’s nice to know it resonates with you. But I’m not a Scorpio though living with one 🙂
      
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      1. Fortunately Human
        
        October 28, 2017
        
        Lol….wit is what keeps us alive….
        
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      2. Smitha V
        
        October 28, 2017
        
        Yes it does…we finally agree! 🙂
        
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      3. Fortunately Human
        
        October 28, 2017
        
        Yes….agree culture is a noble profession…..
        
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      4. Smitha V
        
        October 28, 2017
        
        Agree!
        
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somisandy

October 23, 2017

Beautiful and thoughtful lines

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 23, 2017
  
  Thanks Sowmya for reading. Am glad you liked it.
  
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milan rajkumar

October 22, 2017

Wonderful imagery !

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 22, 2017
  
  I’m happy you found it so. Thank you for commenting
  
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  1. milan rajkumar
    
    October 22, 2017
    
    Welcome !
    
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viewsofpreethib

October 21, 2017

Wow awesome write Smitha…. ❤

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 21, 2017
  
  Thanks a lot Preethi. Glad you enjoyed reading it. Xxx
  
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  1. viewsofpreethib
    
    October 21, 2017
    
    Loved it Smitha… Every word brings out the emotions one goes through in their life atleast once….
    
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    1. Smitha V
      
      October 21, 2017
      
      ❤ It’s nice to know you could relate to it. It’s nice to know that this poem helped bring back memories and emotions. Thanks Preethi for sharing how you felt.
      
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      1. viewsofpreethib
        
        October 22, 2017
        
        Your welcome Smitha 🙂
        
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Andrea Stephenson

October 18, 2017

This captures the ups and downs of relationships, getting to know one another and that fierce loyalty once the getting to know one another is done.

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 19, 2017
  
  Its as you so perfectly put it ” the fierce loyalty once the getting to know one another is done’. I love the way you’ve explained it …so simply. Thank you Andrea☺
  
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Feelings and Freedom

October 18, 2017

Good one Smitha! Hope none of your friends walked away from you.. Happy Diwali!

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 18, 2017
  
  Thanks Vandana☺. Happy Diwali to you too my dear. No Vandana, thankfully not… I was planning to walk away from someone but I realised I’m just too loyal, maybe because I trust cautiously. Thanks for your concern😘
  
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  1. Feelings and Freedom
    
    October 18, 2017
    
    Hmm…walking away isn’t easy for good people 🙂
    
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    1. Smitha V
      
      October 18, 2017
      
      😘 you make me feel better.
      
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      1. Feelings and Freedom
        
        October 18, 2017
        
        I am glad 🙂
        
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Ben Aqiba

October 18, 2017

Hi Smitha,

Wow. If that is not a true love,I don’t know what is it !? That stranger is lucky guy 🙂 Thank you

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 18, 2017
  
  Thanks Ben😊. It’s also meant for those friends who have won my trust.
  
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