I’ll walk to the end of the earth with you

via Daily Prompt: Loyal

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Dear Stranger,

 

I may be unfriendly,

You may find me distant,

I may be bossy,

You may find me arrogant…

 

I may be prudent,

You may find me doubting,

I may be upfront,

You may find me frustrating…

 

Little snippets here and there,

A story we write together,

One stitch at a time,  I’ll weave every tear-

A bond I’ll deftly make – every storm to weather…

 

A promise I’ll make, if I give you my trust,

It’ll be forever,

I’ll stand by you through your worst,

And make excuses when you waver…

 

If I give you my heart,

I’ll not look back; no matter the bend,

And if ever our paths, one day, do part,

I’ll wait for you at the journey’s end. ..

 

Love,

A loyal friend

 

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27 responses to “I’ll walk to the end of the earth with you”

  1. Fortunately Human Avatar

    It was the greatest dedication I can experience…that too it was for a stranger…from a …to be friend….great…. I hope it ended with that…. I am still seeing words lying here and there after that….is it my system…that is showing me those pieces…?

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      It starts with a stranger, any stranger…who I would take a long time to to trust. But once that is done…then even if the person falters and our paths do separate, I wouldn’t forget the good times or the good done. Will not turn everything of the past black just because of the present differences…have I filled in the missing pieces 🙂

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      1. Fortunately Human Avatar

        Yes you did….looks like a typical Scorpio….but yes….this type of character trait is unique though awesome….reading this comment…feels as if looking at the mirror…..

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Thank you so much…It’s nice to know it resonates with you. But I’m not a Scorpio though living with one 🙂

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          1. Fortunately Human Avatar

            Lol….wit is what keeps us alive….

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            1. Smitha V Avatar

              Yes it does…we finally agree! 🙂

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              1. Fortunately Human Avatar

                Yes….agree culture is a noble profession…..

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  2. somisandy Avatar

    Beautiful and thoughtful lines

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Sowmya for reading. Am glad you liked it.

      Like

  3. milan rajkumar Avatar

    Wonderful imagery !

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      I’m happy you found it so. Thank you for commenting

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  4. viewsofpreethib Avatar

    Wow awesome write Smitha…. ❤

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks a lot Preethi. Glad you enjoyed reading it. Xxx

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      1. viewsofpreethib Avatar

        Loved it Smitha… Every word brings out the emotions one goes through in their life atleast once….

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          ❤ It’s nice to know you could relate to it. It’s nice to know that this poem helped bring back memories and emotions. Thanks Preethi for sharing how you felt.

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          1. viewsofpreethib Avatar

            Your welcome Smitha 🙂

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  5. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    This captures the ups and downs of relationships, getting to know one another and that fierce loyalty once the getting to know one another is done.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Its as you so perfectly put it ” the fierce loyalty once the getting to know one another is done’. I love the way you’ve explained it …so simply. Thank you Andrea☺

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  6. Feelings and Freedom Avatar

    Good one Smitha! Hope none of your friends walked away from you.. Happy Diwali!

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Vandana☺. Happy Diwali to you too my dear. No Vandana, thankfully not… I was planning to walk away from someone but I realised I’m just too loyal, maybe because I trust cautiously. Thanks for your concern😘

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      1. Feelings and Freedom Avatar

        Hmm…walking away isn’t easy for good people 🙂

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          😘 you make me feel better.

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  7. Ben Aqiba Avatar

    Hi Smitha,

    Wow. If that is not a true love,I don’t know what is it !? That stranger is lucky guy 🙂 Thank you

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks Ben😊. It’s also meant for those friends who have won my trust.

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