NaPoWriMo 2018: Day 12- The City of Dreams

Today’s (optional) prompt is to write a haibun that takes in the natural landscape of the place you live. It may be the high sierra, dusty plains, lush rainforest, or a suburbia of tiny, identical houses – but wherever you live, here’s your chance to bring it to life through the charming mix-and-match methodology of haibun. 

I’ve written a Haibun earlier on places I’ve visited because prose alone just did not seem sufficient to catch the magic of the place and poetry alone seemed incomplete in explaining what I’d seen. But these were about places that I had traveled to and stayed in for not more than a week. Writing a haibun on a place that I’ve lived in for almost all my life seems difficult because at some point the familiarity of a place makes it lose its magic. However, writing it feels timely and is a tribute to this country that I love.


 

Bright lights, shiny mosaic tiles, smiling faces, grandeur, a maze of roads, flyovers and certain kind of discipline is what you encounter, when you land in the Pearl of the Gulf, the City of dreams, Dubai. For those who’ve never been to a Middle-Eastern country and for whom this region either brings back fairy-tale images from the Arabian Nights tales of beautiful princesses held in fortresses, ruthless Sheikhs, flying carpets and magical urns or dreadful images of war and blood-shed, visiting the U.A.E is a pleasant eye-opener to the Arab hospitality and inclusive society. A sense of comfort exists that seems almost unreal, a sense of being safe that makes it unique and a sense of being accepted no matter where you come from. More than 200 nationalities live in harmony on this blessed land.

 

A kaleidoscope
Faces, languages, cultures
The world in one place

Tall towers that touch the sky, luxurious shopping malls that make you splurge, restaurants that serve global cuisines and sprawling sea-side resorts stand tall alongside souks selling spices, wooden dhows that ferry people across the creek as sea-gulls fly overhead and  Mosques whose minarets light up the starless night sky.  

Golden rays, blue seas,
Swaying palms, orange sunsets
Silken sands, clear skies

In this city where cranes dot the skyline and where wild shrubs grow on desert sand, is a street that leads to where I live. An oasis in the desert, it’s where spider lilies and fox-tails line the pavement and pink, purple and white petunias flutter in the warm spring breeze. Its where wood-peckers and mynas fly in during the winters and stay on until spring.  Its when the children come out with their cycles, serious walkers take to the street along with the marathon runners and dog-walkers walk their dogs. There’s a man-made lake too in the vicinity where ducks entertain. Its during these 8 months that the oasis and the city comes alive and is abuzz with activity. 

Then summer comes and the sun looks down with rage; and for the next four months we remain blissfully in our cage.  The birds fly away, the land is parched, the few shrubs wither and the sand shines likes blazing coal. In a city that hibernates in the summer, the date palms remain giving solace to the weary traveler and are a reminder to those who stay behind, that we will survive and the city shall once again thrive.

Copyright©, 2018. lifeateacher.wordpress.com. All Rights Reserved.

 

 

17 responses to “NaPoWriMo 2018: Day 12- The City of Dreams”

  1. Vivian Zems Avatar

    Beautiful! The tourism industry should pay you for this!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Ha ha. Thanks Vivian. It’s really sweet of you to say so…

      1. Vivian Zems Avatar
  2. […] THOUGHTS – National Poetry Writing Month 2018, Day 12 – A haibun about place 15. WHAT LIFE SAID TO ME – NaPoWriMo 2018: Day 12- The City of Dreams 16. – K is for Kainotophobia and Kakorrhaphiophobia 17. The Man with the Blue Guitar – […]

  3. factfictionfake Avatar

    Brings back memories of my business trip to Dubai, a wonderful eclectic city.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Wow! Thank you for your comment. It makes me feel more confident of the description…when it reminds a visitor of their visit. Thank you so much.

  4. shalini Avatar

    Beautiful post. Loved the pics

  5. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    I have never been to the Middle East, Smitha. A lovely insight into life in Dubai.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      You must visit then Robbie. Not so much of greenery as S.Africa has but Dubai is unique in its own way. Its a wonderful getaway when you want to pamper yourself. Am glad you liked it.

      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

        I really did, Smitha. It is lovely to learn more about other places.

        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Thank you Robbie. Xxx

  6. Feelings and Freedom Avatar

    Wow Smitha! You have detailed the beauty of Dubai with such wonderful words. It’s a lovely place indeed. We loved the city when we visited😊

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Vandana I actually thought of you when I wrote this. Wanted to know if this is how you felt when you visited😊. Your comment answers the question I had. Thank you.

      1. Feelings and Freedom Avatar

        Oh really! 🤗🤗🤗🤗 your poem should be posted on travel blogs and Dubai tourism office 😊😊

        1. Smitha V Avatar

          😍😘😘😘😘you made my day. Hugs.

  7. Dahlia Avatar

    Oh my Smitha this was quite extraordinary! I confess I had a very different image of Dubai – mostly as a shoppers paradise. But you have made me put Dubai on my bucket list. I especially liked the first haiku.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Dahlia it is. Have been to many places but this is 1 place where you can see so many different nationalities in minutes at the mall or the airport. I liked the first Haiku too. 😊 Perfectly represent the country. You must visit if only to see how a desert has been transformed so beautifully. And thank you so much Dahlia.

Leave a Reply

Blog at WordPress.com.

Discover more from Eúnoia

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading