2/3 : To You I Want to Say

This is the second poem in the series of poems I have written for mental health awareness. To read the first, you can click on the link 1/3 :This Feeling

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The second poem in this series is titled, ‘To You I want to say‘

To you I want to say

Pray each time you feel-

You’re losing hope

Pray each time you feel-

You cannot cope

Tell yourself you can

Each time it feels you cannot

Tell yourself you can

Each time it feels you dare not

To you I want to say

Close your eyes and breathe

It’s gonna be fine

Close your eyes and breathe

Things will fall in line

Don’t waste your precious life

For, you have so much to give

Don’t worry about this internal strife

For now, Live!

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8 responses to “2/3 : To You I Want to Say”

Andrea Stephenson

October 20, 2019

And after despair comes hope. The previous poem explored that feeling of being trapped in despair, but this one shines a light of hope.

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October 17, 2019

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athousandbitsofpaper

October 17, 2019

I really enjoyed this poem – very comforting

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 17, 2019
  
  Hey, you weren’t around for sometime. So good to hear from you again. Welcome back! And thank you for sharing how you felt on reading this poem🌷. I wanted for it to be just that- ‘ comforting’ so thanks again.😊
  
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  1. athousandbitsofpaper
    
    October 17, 2019
    
    Hey! hey back 😊 no I was gone for ages I’m just picking up the pieces and starting again but the more I read and look around the more I want to smack myself for leaving I. The first place – I have really missed my blogs other blogs and the community in general – lovely to be back 😁
    
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    1. Smitha V
      
      October 17, 2019
      
      Yes wordpress is a great community. Better than all others. I’m glad you’re back 😊
      
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Infinite Living

October 17, 2019

Loved reading this positive powerful poem!

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1. Smitha V
  
  October 17, 2019
  
  Thank you Pragalbha. I wish more people who are going through depression get to hear this. Its’ sad the number of school children going through it.
  
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