Ripped Jeans

I wrote this poem on the prompt by the same name given by the Fb group ‘TSL’ in April . Its based on an experience I had on our last day of shopping in March this year, after which the malls closed.

For those who do not know when ‘Ripped jeans’ came into being and what they signified, you can read it here Ripped Jeans- the history Now read the poem and let me know what you think.

A high-end store
Sliding glass door
Bright spotlights, shiny marble tiles
Hanging and folded in neat piles
Along the aisles
Are jeans in every  style- Flair, boot-cut, skinny
Straight, boyfriend, cropped and baggy
Black, grey, white, peach, sap green shade
And blue- once, an identifier of a man's trade!

"It's the jean festival," the salesgirl beams
"This here is a hot-seller," her eye gleams

Pointing to a pair with a gaping hole
That costs the price of many whole
"Distressed!" she says, "This one, Ma'am."
"Oh! That I most certainly am!"
I say, looking at the price tag
For something that looks like a rag
 'No way I'll pay for something that's torn-
That looks dilapidated and worn!'
"Ripped jeans- they're all the rage," she says, trying  to explain
But it’s all in vain

My mind is shut,  I pick one out of the lot-  threadbare!
At the knee, I can’t help but stare.

There's another that's shredded at the thigh
I wonder why
Anyone would especially pay
For what the poor man wears  every  day!
Wouldn't be easier to wear a pair of shorts
Or perhaps scotts?
"That one is is designer." 
She quips, not giving up, "It’s not made with the laser
But hand-cut specifically.”
And I’m thinking ‘Really!

All I see is a glaring tear
Invented in the seventies to say, ‘We dare!’

Tell me what it stands for now though
So I’ll be convinced to part with my dough
Don’t get me wrong, I’m no conservative
I’m a liberal, not stuck up; but it’s imperative
I understand this fad
Before I buy jeans that are sad!
‘Distressed Ma’am, Not sad,’ she says, pointing to the stack
As I pick up Mom jeans from the rack.

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12 responses to “Ripped Jeans”

  1. Manja Mexi Mexcessive Avatar

    Disgrace. You did well with the poem.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Disgrace – the ripped jeans or me not picking it up?🙂.
      Thank you Manja. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Yayy! Good to know you feel the same.

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  2. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    A very amusing read Smitha, I’d tend to agree with you 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Lol…happy to know you agree. So glad you enjoyed reading it🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Infinite Living Avatar

    So beautifully composed and absolutely fun read 😊 I would agree with you!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      I’m so glad you enjoyed reading it Pragalbha 😀 and yayy, we belong to the same club.🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  4. judeitakali Avatar

    Loved this and the rhythm.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Jude for writing back…just when I was thinking where all the poetry lovers were🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. judeitakali Avatar

        we gat you, hehe.

        Liked by 1 person

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