NaPoWriMo Day 10 – l’amour c’est toi et moi

Love is,
the bounce in my step,
the smile on my lips,
the sparkle in my eyes,
the warmth in my heart,
the kindness in my words

Love is, you and me-
Friends, with no strings
Apple and cinnamon
Lock and key
stream and pebble
a sweet symphony, a slow dance.

Love, is us-
A home with no doors,
Spring after winter,
Bass and treble
Waves and shore
Different, yet, together

To love you, is to love me.
My dreamcatcher,my lavender,
my favorite pastime, my quick-reference guide
my map, my secret keeper
Love is, you by my side
l'amour c'est toi et moi.

*l'amour c'est toi et moi- Love is, you and me

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12 responses to “NaPoWriMo Day 10 – l’amour c’est toi et moi”

  1. balroop2013 Avatar

    Simple and superb! That is love and so is your poem Smitha. Loved it.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Balroop ji. I love that you loved the poem 🙂 X

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  2. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    Smitha, this is light but passionate and uses inventive images to tell the story of what ‘love is’.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you, Andrea for specifically talking about the images. I wanted them to be different and yet convey the message. Your comment makes me believe it came out right. Thank you!🙂

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  3. Vineetha Brijesh Avatar

    Wow!!! This is so sweet. I loved the first para and also the one
    Love is us
    A home with no doors.isint such home best?

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      🙂 Lol! I had to dig into the depths of my heart to find the love… after an exhausting weekend.
      Yes, such a home is best because it shows there is trust.

      Like

  4. Sangbad Avatar

    I was also at the blank like you…but at last being able to jot down the words and composed them to form a poem…expect you’ll read mine and will share your thoughts…

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Sometimes, the simplest of topics become the toughest to write on. I wrote this poem at the stroke of midnight, hence had no time to read. But, will head over to your blog now.

      Like

  5. Manja Maksimovič Avatar

    Ahhh, Smitha, what a heartfelt outpouring.

    “Love, is us-
    A home with no doors,
    Spring after winter,
    Bass and treble
    waves and shore
    Different, yet, together”

    Even though there are no doors, such a home is the best. And the way you rhyme “treble” and “together” really made me happy. The whole poem did. Judging from your smile, you are the most loved person in the world. 🙂 Let it last!

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Manja, seeing your lovely comment made me beam with joy. I was so sleepy that I struggled to keep my eyes open. I’ve edited it slightly( after a good night’s sleep)🙂. Please reread it and tell me if it’s better.
      Thank you, Manja for blessings. You’re a good person and so full of love yourself. It sparkles in your warm words, in every beautiful picture you take and you❤️. Feel blessed to have met you.

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      1. Manja Maksimovič Avatar

        Oh, hard to say which is better without a comparison. I noticed you threw the chauffeur out though. 😉 And thank you for all your kind words for me!

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Ha ha, I did. Though, I do love that he drives me around;) But to write it, I must have dozed off. Lol

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