NaPoWriMo Day 4, 2023- Migrating

Today’s poetry resource is this collection of poetry video recordings from the Dodge Poetry Program. If you’re not familiar with the Program, every two years it sponsors a four-day poetry festival in New Jersey, bringing together poets and students from across the United States and internationally.

And now here’s another prompt drawn from our archives – and, as usual, optional! Today, let’s try writing triolets. A triolet is an eight-line poem. All the lines are in iambic tetramenter (for a total of eight syllables per line), and the first, fourth, and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines. This means that the poem begins and ends with the same couplet. Beyond this, there is a tight rhyme scheme (helped along by the repetition of lines) — ABaAabAB.

I'm migrating eastward, I feel -
my heart sinking; it's hard leaving 
all that I have ever known, behind.
I'm migrating eastward, I feel -
dread of the unknown. God, be kind.
Wonder what awaits me yonder.
I'm migrating eastward, I feel-
my heart sinking; it's hard leaving.

Copyright@smithavishwanathsblog.com. All Rights Reserved.

‘Here’s an example by Thomas Hardy:

Birds at Winter

Around the house the flakes fly faster,
And all the berries now are gone
From holly and cotoneaster
Around the house. The flakes fly! – faster
Shutting indoors the crumb-outcaster
We used to see upon the lawn
Around the house. The flakes fly faster
And all the berries now are gone!

Triolets were in vogue among the Victorians — all those repetitions can add a sort of melancholy gravitas to a poem, but watch out! They can also make the poem sound oddly gong-like. A playful, satirical poem, on the other hand, can be easily written in the triolet form, especially if you can find a way to make the non-repeating lines slightly change the meaning of the repeated ones. Here’s an example of a modern, humorous triolet, by Wendy Cope:

Valentine

My heart has made its mind up
And I’m afraid it’s you.
Whatever you’ve got lined up,
My heart has made its mind up
And if you can’t be signed up
This year, next year will do.
My heart has made its mind up
And I’m afraid it’s you.

Happy writing!’

13 responses to “NaPoWriMo Day 4, 2023- Migrating”

  1. navasolanature Avatar

    Great poems and Wendy Cope always fun!

  2. SelmaMartin Avatar

    Yes! applause. Blessings.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Selma 🙂 for reading and the applause. XXX

  3. Infinite Living Avatar

    This is beautifully done Smitha 🙂

  4. Bryan Ens Avatar

    That fear of the unknown is palpable

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you,Bryan. I think the rigidity of the form helped in bringing out the feelings more strongly.

  5. rajkkhoja Avatar
    rajkkhoja

    Very nice poem. Enjoying poem.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

      1. rajkkhoja Avatar
        rajkkhoja

        You are most welcome!

  6. Sangbad Avatar

    homecoming and the longing…I felt

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Sangbad. I’m so glad the poem brought out the message.

  7. kittysverses Avatar

    Enjoyed this poem of longing. 🙂

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂 It was fun writing it with all the conditions.

Leave a Reply

Blog at WordPress.com.

Discover more from Eúnoia

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading