NaPoWriMo 2023- Day 9: Is this love?

Today’s poetry resource is UbuWeb, a vast repository of the avant-garde. You could get lost for days among the films, audio recordings, PDFs of small press publications, and other oddities here. If you’re looking to have the top of your head screwed off (figuratively), check out the “365 Days Project.”

Finally, here’s our prompt for the day (as always, optional). We’re calling today Sonnet Sunday, as we’re challenging you to write in what is probably the most robust poetic form in English. A traditional sonnet is 14 lines long, with each line having ten syllables that are in iambic pentameter (where an unstressed syllable is followed by a stressed syllable). While love is a very common theme in sonnets, they’re also known for having a kind of argumentative logic, in which a problem is posed in the first eight lines or so, discussed or argued about in the next four, and then resolved in the last two lines. A very traditional sonnet will rhyme, though there are a variety of different rhyme schemes.

Today, sonnets are probably most commonly associated with Shakespeare (who wrote more than 150, and felt very little compunction about messing around with the form, at least to the extent of regularly saying “who cares” to strict iambs). But poets’ attention to the form hasn’t waned in the 400 years or so since the Bard walked the fields around Stratford-upon-Avon and tramped the stage boards of Merrie Old England. Take a look at this little selection of contemporary sonnets by Dennis JohnsonAlice NotleyRobert Hass, and Jill Alexander Essbaum. You’ll notice that while all of these poems play in some way on the theme of love, they are tonally extremely different – as is the kind or quality of love that they discuss. Some rhyme, some don’t. They mostly stick to around 14 lines but They’re also not at all shy about incorporating contemporary references (the Rolling Stones, telephones, etc).

Today, we’d like to challenge you to write your own sonnet. Incorporate tradition as much or as little as you like – while keeping in general to the theme of “love.”

I wrote 14 lines – ABAB CDCD EFEF GG – 10 syllables each. My poem is titled- ‘This is love’

I love you very much; it's true, I know
But, I wonder what I am doing here.
Is it because I have nowhere to go
Or nowhere I would rather be than here?

This question's been haunting me since sometime.
Is this symbiotic or love ageing?
A habit I adopted over time
Or plain dependency, I keep thinking.

I worry if you will keep loving me
the way you do, if I tell you, my need
exceeds my love for you; I fear you'll see,
no longer care and think of it as greed.

But then, when you hold me close in your arms
It puts an end to all my fears and qualms. All Rights Reserved.

4 responses to “NaPoWriMo 2023- Day 9: Is this love?”

  1. Abirbhav Avatar

    The last line is too awesome and shot out of the boundary.. Thanks Madam for sharing and as usual it’s great.. 🙂
    I had been dormant for 2 years and have a Herculean catching up to do in terms of your writings.. Have moved to Delhi long back and have restarted writing blog posts.. Do visit and let me know your comments.. 🙂
    How have you been?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Good to hear from you again, Abirbhav. Welcome back! That sounds like a Herculean task, indeed. Will definitely visit your blog. 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  2. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    This is very beautiful, Smitha.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Robbie. I love that you loved it.

      Liked by 1 person

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