NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 21- Courage

Our daily resource is the BBC’s archive of poetry-related writing, where you’ll find essays and articles aplenty, exploring different poets, poems, and poetic forms.

Last but not least, here’s today’s (optional) prompt. Begin by reading Sarah Gambito’s poem “Grace.” Now, choose an abstract noun from the list below, and then use that as the title for a poem that contains very short lines, and at least one invented word.

Here's my poem 'Courage'

Fear, knots
my gut
clenches
my heart-

a fishbone
stuck
in my throat.

It's thorns puncture
my epiglottis/
epithelium
making it bleed.

The luminal surface
bruised, 
bears scars,
thickens.

Coradens*.
And Courage
is born.

Impermeable
to crashing waves.

Impregnable.

Impervious
to defeat
failure
envy.

Iridescent
like the northern light
sparkles in the eye.
Incandescent  

shatters darkness,
fear,
looms tall.
Radiates.

Infecting those around.


*coradens/coradening- hardening because of courage

13 responses to “NaPoWriMo 2023: Day 21- Courage”

  1. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet Avatar

    Courage is an essential trait, beautifully described in your poem. I admire the fact that you wrote this lovely poem when you were under the weather, Smitha! Hope you feel better soon! <3

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Cheryl, I’m sorry for the late reply. I must have missed replying somehow. I just noticed I hadn’t. Thank you for appreciating the poem. I’m very glad you liked it. I’d forgotten all about it. Seeing your comment,I read it again :)❤️

  2. Teagan Riordain Geneviene Avatar

    I’m glad you shared this, Smitha. How evocative. Beautifully composed. Hugs.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Teagan, Thank you for your lovely comment. I’m very glad you enjoyed the poem.
      Wishing you a lovely week ahead. Hugs.

  3. Sonia Dogra Avatar

    What an amazing poem, Smitha. I was trying to guess what coradening would mean and how you came about it. Loved the beginning of your poem.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Sonia. I had no idea when I wrote ‘Coradening’ or ‘Coradens’ that ‘corazon’ in Spanish means heart. Selma pointed it out in the comments. She said, so ‘coradening’ would then mean ‘strengthening of the heart muscles’. I was amazed to find out.
      I’m so glad you liked the poem. XXX

  4. rajkkhoja Avatar
    rajkkhoja

    Beautiful write. Nice picture.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you very much. I’m glad you liked them both.

      1. rajkkhoja Avatar
        rajkkhoja

        You are most welcome!

  5. SelmaMartin Avatar

    Coradening — hardening because of courage — like a muscle, then.
    And did you know Cora is the first two syllables of corazón? I like it. It’s the heart reacting to courage. Beautiful.

    But that fish bone stuck in your throat— gasp! Be careful please.

    Thanks for the lovely poem. Blessings.

    Are you home now? Hope so. XoXo

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Selma, That’s so beautiful. I had no idea. Thank you for letting me know. I like the sound of ‘Coradening’ more now.
      As always, your words and blessings are precious. Thank you,Selma.
      I’ll be home only on the 24th. But I didn’t feel well today, so I didn’t step out and got the time to write the poem. Hugs and love to you.

      1. SelmaMartin Avatar

        Feel better soon. Blessings.

        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Thanks so much,Selma. Back home now. And am glad🙂.
          Hoping you have a lovely week ahead. Xxx

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