Quadrille: What you see in the Mirror

Merril D. Smith is hosting at dVerse today. The prompt is mirror. Merril’s provided the following example and link to other poems on the same theme.

“I am not cruel, only truthful‚
The eye of a little god, four-cornered.”
From Sylvia Plath, “Mirror”

Here are some other mirror poems.

This is my first time at dVerse. I’d like to thank Colleen for directing me to this.

Now, for my poemWhat you see in the Mirror.

Thank God the world's not one big mirror
Or else each time I caught my reflection
I'd worry about my glitter
getting duller.

What purpose does it serve- a mirror?
Don't we know how we look?
Why do we then need a reminder
Like a calendar

of the passage of days? It would matter
if in every wrinkle, we could only see the journeys we took
And not bother
about the puffy eyes, sallow skin, and growing older.

If we saw every line as a sign
of having lived.
Then, rather than whine
We'd pour ourselves a glass of wine

For, in every scar
that mars our face
we'd only see how far
we've come, and the battles we've lost and won.



* After I wrote the above poem, I realized, I had to write a quadrille (a poem of 44 words).So here's my quadrille.

I'm glad the world's not one big mirror
Or else it'd be a constant reminder
Of how old I'd grown
Now I need to remember
that I am older
each time I prance
and dance
Jump and run
Or eat all that is sweet.

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25 responses to “Quadrille: What you see in the Mirror”

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  2. Abirbhav Avatar

    Both the poems are lovely.. Nice to see you experimenting with different styles of poetry.. Learnt about quadrille now, thanks to you.. 🙂

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you, Abirbhav. The poetry writing month (April) is a month of experimenting. I’ve been doing it since 2017 :).

      1. Abirbhav Avatar

        Awesome, Madam.. 🙂 Inspired by you, I have decided to experiment with the next blog post of mine.. Choose from the following prompts and I will write a blog post around it.. Here are the options:
        a. Flora
        b. Hell
        c. Slurp
        d. Combo
        e. Mystic
        Eagerly waiting for your response.. The post will be released within 24 hours of your choice of the prompt.. 🙂

        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Lol…are you in Marketing or Sales? Whatever I choose, I’m sure the post will be the same, but I’ll choose mystic since you asked.🙂

          1. Abirbhav Avatar

            I am in Strategy.. 🙂 The post will be different for different prompts, that’s the purpose of it.. Will now present you with something “mystical”.. 🙂

          2. Abirbhav Avatar

            Delivered as promised.. 🙂 but fingers crossed regarding your expert review.. Hope this is “mystical” enough..

            https://theunclicheophile.com/2023/05/22/%e3%81%a1%e3%82%87%e3%81%97%e3%81%9c%e3%82%93%e3%81%ae-the-mystical-aura-of-japan/

          3. Smitha V Avatar

            Beautiful post. Just read it. I’m impressed that you delivered ‘mystical’. Good strategy!

          4. Abirbhav Avatar

            Ahh, you decoded the “strategy”, now what do I do .. 🙂 Thank you for reading it and for your kind words, though as per my “strategy”, each of the word choices I mentioned can become a 10-headed content generator with other words still hidden.. 🙂 I would however urge you to have a look at the Prelude or “Dream” though, its more heartfelt.. 🙂
            http://theunclicheophile.com/2023/05/17/%e3%82%86%e3%82%81-%d0%bc%d0%b5%d1%87%d1%82%d0%b0-a-dream-a-humbling-experience-and-a-melange-of-emotions/

  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    It’s good that we can keep dancing…. (even in front of mirrors)

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Lol…it is, indeed. Thank you for reading the poem.

  4. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar

    Smitha, I’m so glad you made it to dVerse. I knew you would love trying the different prompts. I love both of your poems! Huge hugs to you! 🩷

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Colleen,it’s fun being part of a group. You were right. Thank you for nudging me to participate. Big hugs back🙂❤️

      1. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar

        Yay! I’ve learned so much about poetry from this group. I try to participate each week, if my work load allows. I’m glad you enjoyed, Smitha. 🩷

  5. Helen Avatar

    I prance, dance, jump and run most days! Hope to meet you out there on the path! Great quadrille.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Ha ha… Hi Helen, Thank you for your lovely comment. Happy to meet you here and hopefully, on the path where you dance and prance. X

  6. Susan St.Pierre Avatar

    Super quadrille! Loved it.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much for your generous appreciation, Susan. It’s very kind of you.

      1. Susan St.Pierre Avatar

        My pleasure. You’re welcome.

  7. merrildsmith Avatar

    Thank you very much for joining us for the dVerse Quadrille. Perhaps we will see you at the Open Link Live, too!
    I’m glad you rewrote the poem to fit the quadrille form of 44 words. We do look different in the mirror at different times in our lives!

  8. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Smitha, two lovely poems. I especially like the first one. It is very expressive.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Robbie, Thank you. Me too! The second one was in a hurry when I realized I hadn’t done the quadrille and had already published the post while the first one was done with thought.

  9. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    I like both poems, Smitha! Thanks for sharing!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Yvette. It’s very kind of you.💕

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