Tanka Tuesday 050825, Thursday Doors 07.08.25 – Doors in Melbourne, Australia

I love participating in Tanka Tuesday challenges because each week, you don’t just write syllabic poetry but also learn something new. This week, Willow is the host of Tanka Tuesday and she asks us to write a taiga on a photograph taken by us, using Canva. This was my first attempt at writing poetry on a picture (I never tried because I had no idea how to do it). Colleen provided the instructions on how to do it and voila! I succeeded. It’s a huge achievement for someone like me who’s scared of giving any new form of technology a try. If you’d like to try it out, check this link.

Well, here’s mine for the week. I took this picture outside Ca De Vin restaurant in Melbourne. I loved the warm glow the candles cast on the ledge. While I took the photograph in colour, I converted it to B &W for this challenge.

Original Photograph

I hadn’t noticed that the candleholders had been chained until I began writing the taiga. It’s so true that writing makes you observant or you have to be observant to be able to write.

Now coming to the Thursday Doors challenge which is not being held this week. I am participating nevertheless as the post will be included by Dan, the host, next week.
This week, I’m sharing doors of Saint Paul’s Cathedral in Melbourne. This beautiful sandstone church stands across Flinders Station, where I was supposed to meet a school friend. Our meeting was meant to be historic as we were going to be seeing each other after 35 years! We had planned to meet at the station. Why in the world we would choose such a busy place to meet is beyond me.

Both of us were there at the agreed place at the agreed time but we didn’t meet. Not that day. After waiting for an hour and a half, we returned home disappointed. One would wonder how such a thing could happen in today’s world. Well, she forgot her phone at home and decided to trust her eyes (as we had agreed on the meeting place). I, on the other hand, had complete faith in the phone and when I did not see her, I called, messaged, messaged again, and photographed my surroundings during the long wait. No, I wasn’t bored. That’s when I saw the church (which is impossible to miss) and decided to enter it.

After lighting a candle and sitting at the pew and praying, I left the church and waited some more, wondering why in the world she hadn’t messaged but not too worried as she’s lived in Australia for the last 30 or more years. When she did get in touch with me on returning home, and I asked her where she was waiting and what she was wearing. She said, ‘Red’. I looked through my photographs to see if my camera had caught what my eyes had missed.

Flinders Station were we were supposed to meet and my eyes were on the front entrance (the arch)
See the speck of red on the left? Behind the van. That’s her. Makes a good plot for a story, right?

Although, she had her plate full (being a university professor, psychologist and doing a lot of pro bono work for victims of domestic abuse), she decided to meet me, the next day. She said, ‘Let’s erase yesterday.”

So, that’s what we did. This time near the statue at State Library, another iconic building on Swanston Street.

And there we are, happy to have finally made it

Established in 1854, the State Library is the oldest library in Victoria and one of the first free libraries in the world.

It’s a beautiful place in the heart of the city. The buzz of the streets ends as soon as you cross the threshold.
The steps leading to the first floor. See the stained glass windows?

The library is simply grand. The first time I entered it, I felt like I entered heaven- big well-lit halls with white walls, high ceilings, shelves full of books and individual desks and chairs to work on, galleries with exhibitions running and museum displays. While there is a soft hum on the ground floor with people entering and exiting, the top floor is completely quiet and is perfect for working.

The architect of this structure, Joseph Reed, is also the person who designed the Town Hall and Grand Exhibition Hall. The similarity in all these buildings is unmistakable.

A market of local artisans was in progress at the exhibition hall when I visited the Grand exhibition hall. I was excited to see the place as I had heard all about it from my daughter. They have their exams in the hall. 3000 students stomp towards it, in the wee hours of the morning even on cold, winter days. While they feel a sense of pride sitting in those halls writing their papers, walking in the cold, waiting for the doors to open, reminded me of a Dickensian novel.

Last but not the least, here’s a painting of a door, I did, before travelling to Australia. I didn’t share it here earlier. So, here it is. Another of my sketchpad, watercolor paintings.

That’s all from my side (which I understand is quite a bit but I couldn’t help myself). I hope you enjoyed the poetry, architecture, art and the little story of meeting an old friend.

I end this post with these words by Elif Shafaq, ‘Do not go with the flow. Be the flow.’

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28 responses to “Tanka Tuesday 050825, Thursday Doors 07.08.25 – Doors in Melbourne, Australia”

  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Smitha, there’s a lot going on in this post. Your taiga poem is lovely and goes beautifully with the poem. I like your new painting too. WRT forgetting your phone. I have done this on the odd occasion and it never turns out well for me. I just turn around and go home to fetch it now.

  2. Marsha Avatar

    You brought back some great memories, Smitha. I visited there in 2016 when I visited Leanne Cole and Carol, the Eternal Traveller. Carol took me to the library and introduced me to her husband’s great-grandfather (I think it was) who was a reknown criminal in the 1800s. He had a place of importance in the history of Melbourne. Weird how that works sometimes!

    I love that you finally met up with your friend. Your missed appointment made a great post for us. The pictures you took are beautiful. 🙂 xxxx

  3. Jacqui Murray Avatar

    How wonderful to see each other after so long! And a good story.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks, Jacqui😊. I’ve been away from the blog quite a bit. Lovely to see you here.

  4. Annette Rochelle Aben Avatar

    From the doors to the poetry to your experiences… I am most happy. Thank you.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Annette, your comment makes me happy. I’m so glad you enjoyed the post. Thank you for reading🧡🤗

  5. Dan Antion Avatar

    Your poems and photos are beautiful, Smitha. I enjoyed your story. The little slices of life help us know each other better.

    1. Dan Antion Avatar

      I meant to add that my favorite images are the ones of the candle holders.

      1. Smitha V Avatar

        Mine too, and I like the original photo. The warm glow of the candles is more visible.

    2. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Dan, for taking the time to check out the post and for your kind words.
      I’m glad you feel that way, too, Dan… It makes the connection more real when we share a little of our lives here. Thank you for letting me know it’s okay to share a little personal story.

  6. Chris Hall Avatar

    Wow… wonderful, Smitha!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Chris! 🙂

  7. Sadje Avatar

    Spot on poems.lovely pics. I’m glad you got to meet your friends in the red.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Sadje. I’m happy to know you liked the pictures.
      Ha ha…me too! And she wore red, the next day, too😀

      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome.

  8. balroop singh Avatar

    Lovely stories, beautiful pictures and your taiga feels ethereal due to its background but I must say the original picture is amazing. Your posts are always delightful, Smitha.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Balroop Ji, Thank you for your beautiful comment. You are so encouraging. Your words had me smiling happily. I like the original picture, too. It’s more alive. Your words make me want to write more. Thank you❤️

      1. balroop singh Avatar

        My pleasure.

  9. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    Awesome taiga, Smitha! And your pictures are beautiful!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Yvette. I’m delighted you enjoyed the post.

  10. Meelosmom Avatar

    I loved the stained-glass windows and beautiful carpets in the church, Smitha.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Barbara, yes, the stained glass windows are beautiful. It’s not a carpet. Those are tiles on the floor. I found the entire church beautiful.

      1. Meelosmom Avatar

        Tiles! Wow! I’ll take another look. 🤭

  11. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    Smitha, I’m so proud of you for giving Canva.com a try! 🥳 Good job, my friend. I love the lanterns!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Colleen, for the clear instruction and the pat on the back. I’m not an easy one to teach when it comes to technical stuff. It generally goes over my head. So, ‘Thank you!’ I’m thrilled I got it right😊🧡

      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

        I love the lanterns, by the way!! 💜

  12. willowdot21 Avatar

    Wonderful Taiga and Thursday doors Smitha you did a great job and I loved your verse.
    You actually handled Canva better than I have yet 💜💜💜

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Willow, for the lovely prompt and the example provided. You are kind and generous in complimenting. I’m so glad you liked the verse. I love the photo. Doing this made it more precious. 💛💛💛

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