NaPoWriMo :Day 24 – The Flight of the Kite

And now for our daily prompt (optional, as always)! Taking a cue from Bishop, I’d like to challenge you today to write a poem about an animal. If you’d like to take a look at some other poems for inspiration, you might like James Dickey’s “The Dusk of Horses,” or Tennyson’s “The Eagle.”

Well, since I do not have a pet, the best topic to write about was something that I see from all windows of my home, every single day. I cannot but watch it in awe. The moments of mesmerizing silence, are filled with utmost reverence for creation and the creator.

The Kite


Drifting in open skies,

Soaring, circling, gliding

I watch entranced

The sheer power, the elegance

of those mighty angled wings

and a flick of its forked tail

A straight course and a sharp turn

Covering the canvas of a sky

Focused, unwavering,

mean, beady eyes

Surveys the earth below



I follow its flight from my window

fascinated, enraptured

At the majestic grandeur

And in a heartbeat

it dives,  in a dash-

two hundred feet to the ground

A scurrying rat caught

in its track;

or a scampering squirrel


I speculate; I cannot see


Then, I see it again

as it soars

A slithering snake

hissing, in its black claws

A flash-

And its gone;

With the catch

To its nest; on a  faraway tree,

where awaits a baby kite


for the evening meal.


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7 responses to “NaPoWriMo :Day 24 – The Flight of the Kite”

  1. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    I love that line about covering the canvas of the sky. I can feel the soar of the kite through your words and the determination of the hunt.


    1. Smitha V Avatar

      I read the poem again. Your comments make me want to read my poem again. You make each poem sound so special. It’s very kind of you. Thank you Andrea

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Feelings and Freedom Avatar
    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks a lot Vands.XXX

      Liked by 1 person

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much Katie for your constant good words.XXX

      Liked by 1 person

      1. AutumnWillow Avatar

        You’re welcome 😊


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