NaPoWriMo: Day 26 – I didn’t know

Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that uses repetition. You can repeat a word, or phrase. You can even repeat an image, perhaps slightly changing or enlarging it from stanza to stanza, to alter its meaning. There are (perhaps paradoxically) infinite possibilities in repetition. Want to look at some examples? Perhaps you’ll find inspiration in Joanna Klink’s “Some Feel Rain” or John Pluecker’s “So Many.”


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When she waved ‘Goodbye’ to me at the end

of a regular day at work, with her characteristic

chirpy voice and a bounce in her step that made her

curls fly, I called out ‘See you tomorrow,’ a moment later,

after she’d turned; I didn’t get to smile back. I didn’t know

she wouldn’t make it the next day, that she’d be hit

on the way at 7.00 a.m over the bridge. We were in the same team.

When she laughed and talked of her treatment,

how she’d been so scared of injections in school,

how many surgeries she had, the chemo, the radiation

and said she was leaving for the last check-up, I hugged her

and promised to meet her again once she was back;

I didn’t know that I had made a promise that I could never

fulfill. She was my friend.

When he said he loved fishing and asked me to join the

boys’ for the weekend, on his fishing boat; I said I didn’t want to be

stranded in the middle of the sea. I went to work instead while they

went fishing; I didn’t know I’d be the only one at work to pick the call;

the morning after a day at sea; died of thirst they said, in the scorching heat;

his face cremated in the sand, his work I.D in his pocket and hence the call.

We were peers.

When she said she was wearing a new dress amidst a chuckle and

wondered what people might think of her donning a new outfit

on a frail body with no hair on the head and a dimple in her

cheek, I said it didn’t matter what the world thought; I said I had

accounts to balance, I hung up, I said, ‘I’ll call later’ ;
I didn’t know that it would be our last conversation.

She was my home.

I didn’t know that life was just one breath at a time. I didn’t know that

tomorrow is just air- out of one’s grasp and today is all we’ve got.

I didn’t know that people too came with an expiry date.

And I didn’t know that it has nothing to do with age or looks or what

you eat or wear or did.

I didn’t know why it bothered dad when I said, ‘I didn’t know.’

I didn’t know, how an excuse I used when I was little would

be my crutch into the future.

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15 responses to “NaPoWriMo: Day 26 – I didn’t know”

  1. NaPoWriMo Day 26 – because i could not go out for lunch – Eúnoia Avatar

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  2. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    Beautiful Smitha, so very moving and so wise of course.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Andrea so much for a lovely comment on the poem.

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  3. Kurian Avatar

    Nice post Smitha. Nice challenge

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Kurian

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      1. Kurian Avatar

        You are welcome Smitha

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  4. revivedwriter Avatar

    This hits hard. Good write.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you for your beautiful comment. It makes me feel that I’ve done justice to it.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you Pragalbha. I’m glad you read it. Was one of those poems that relieves you when you write it.

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      1. Infinite Living Avatar

        You are welcome 🙂

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  5. Sangbad Avatar

    Eulogy for two dearest friends, I think?

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Yes…one my friend and the other my best friend, my mother

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      1. Sangbad Avatar

        Apology…it was one of the best of yours this year

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Oh you don’t have to Sangbad. Not everybody will know. Its a poem left to the reader to understand. And thank you for your wonderful words.

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