And now for our penultimate (optional) prompt! The poet William Wordsworth once said that “Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.” For Wordsworth, a poem was the calm after the storm – an opportunity to remember and summon up emotion, but at a time and place that allowed the poet to calmly review, direct and control those feelings. A somewhat similar concept is expressed through the tradition of philosophically-inclined poems explicitly labeled as “meditations,” – like Robert Hass’s “Meditation at Lagunitas,” the charming Frank O’Hara prose poem, “Meditations in an Emergency,” or Charles Baudelaire’s “Meditation.”
Today, I’d like to challenge you to blend these concepts into your own work, by producing a poem that meditates, from a position of tranquility, on an emotion you have felt powerfully. You might try including a dramatic, declarative statement, like Hass’s “All the new thinking is about loss,” or O’Hara’s “It is easy to be beautiful; it is difficult to appear so.” Or, like, Baudelaire, you might try addressing your feeling directly, as if it were a person you could talk to. There are as many approaches to this as there are poet
My poem for today
My ears are red, like I’ve had ‘peri peri,‘ flaming hot
My heart’s racing; like a thief been caught
I know, I know, it’s my mistake
Damn! My ears and my heart just won’t behave
I went late to class and got told off
‘Nothing wrong with that; there’s no need to scoff!’
I mean the teacher’s really sweet
And she told me, really neat-
“Its difficult accommodating, if you’re not in time”
I totally get it but this little ego of mine-
bruised; offended she created a ruckus, her arms and legs flung out
A tantrum she threw; I wished to shout-
‘Accept it and move on. You know you were wrong;
Grow up! You’d have done the same, not too long
ago.’ She heard me, not a whisper, not a whimper; but she didn’t budge
She needed time to nurse the hurt; said, she bore no grudge
Calm, I sat in class; a storm brewing within
In stubborn silence, my hands busy; painting
Deep inside, a simmering concoction of grueling emotion
She has her ways of extortion
But I knew better-
The roles had changed; I was no more the expert, the mentor-
I once used to be; guiding and directing;
Here I was a student; a novice learning
My past achievements, my age, my position; a culprit, a tormentor
Spewing lava from a hereto sleeping volcano; Oh! The sorcerer
My ears still red, I bid the teacher goodbye
I packed my tools, I had no guts to meet her eye
Frightened of the ‘spoilt child’ that wasn’t afraid to show
Hurriedly I stepped out, my head hung low
When in the tranquility of my room I sat
Bruised ego and I had a spat
It took me time to explain,
Alas! But in vain
I gave her time to understand
But she remained adamant in her stand
It made me vulnerable; I grew enraged
She roams free; she has me caged
The Shrew, I must tame
Or have none other, than myself to blame.
- peri peri – spicy Portuguese sauce
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