NaPoWriMo Day 8 – There, I said it!

Today’s prompt comes to us from this list of “all-time favourite writing prompts.” It asks you to name your alter-ego, and then describe him/her in detail. Then write in your alter-ego’s voice. Maybe your alter-ego is a streetwise detective, a superhero, or a very small goldfinch. Whoever or whatever your alternate self maybe, I hope this prompt lets you stretch both your writing skills and your self-knowledge.

I read the prompt when I was on my way to the mall and it left me introspecting. After much thought, I decided my alter-ego had to be either a Queen (Don’t laugh!) or a tortoise (slow and steady). I finally decided on the Queen- not just any queen though; certainly not one who’s only known for sitting pretty. But, one who’s brave enough to fight for what she believes in, who’s not scared to speak up for the right – a warrior queen, a leader. Now, if you’re wondering why not just a warrior, it’s because my alter-ego shows herself only when she’s sure that the fight is civilized and is played by rules – no street fights, no bickering, no backstabbing, no below the belt punches, no meanness. Fair and square- she’s ready to back off when the argument is valid and is fearless if she thinks it’s incorrect. She needs protocol.

The below poem is my alter-ego talking (as per the prompt). It’s things I feel strongly about but discuss only with friends and family because I’m no warrior queen. Thank you, Maureen, for today’s prompt; my alter-ego could finally voice its opinion.

There, I said it

There are things I want to talk about-
things that I can no longer brush under the carpet
For fear of what may happen
to me or my family
Someone needs to take the responsibility.
Enough of dilly-dalying,
standing on the sidelines and watching

How is the hijab row in India
any different from the war on Ukraine?
Both unwanted and both totally unnecessary!
Both saddening and both nonsensical.
As if two years weren't enough
of sickness, death,joblessness,
closure of schools and lives being on hold.

I thought we would learn
But, we are exactly
What we were- selfish, egoistical, beasts
Maniacs!
Sadly, nothing's changed!
But, I'm not going to say, 'Nothing ever will,'
Because hope is what keeps us going.

So, I call upon your sleeping conscience-
You leaders, all. Wake up!
Use your power to do the right thing
Stop this madness! Let people live.
And to all the living people,I say,
'Speak up.Silence is a sin.
Looking away is too-

when your neighbour's home is burning
For, if you don't rise now
It won't be long before yours does too!



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27 responses to “NaPoWriMo Day 8 – There, I said it!”

  1. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    Regally expressed Smitha! I can hear the warrior queen behind the words.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you for humoring me, you are too kind. Much love to you, Andrea. XXX

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  2. SelmaMartin Avatar

    exceptionally lovely. Well said. May peace descend now. xoxo

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Selma, thank you🤗. I do feel relieved after letting it out. Amen to your wish. Hugs.

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  3. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    I completely agree with your fantastic poem, Smitha. We all need to get up now.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Kamal, I was hoping you’d read the poem. Thank you for reading it and your support always.

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        You are always welcome dear Smitha. Happy Sunday 😊😊😊😊

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          Happy Sunday to you too!🤗💕

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          1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

            😊😊😊🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

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  4. Vineetha Brijesh Avatar

    Loved the last para of the poem. Bang on.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks, Vineetha!

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  5. Vineetha Brijesh Avatar

    Wonderful one Smitha.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar
  6. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet Avatar

    Beautifully written and relatable. I discarded a poem about Putin a few days ago because it was too harsh, not because it wasn’t true, but because that is not who I want to be. I also bore in mind that my country, like most countries, is far from perfect. I found your poem quite civil, though it said what you meant to say.

    Have a pleasant weekend, Smitha! ❤

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Cheryl. First, for appreciating the poem and mostly, for relating to it. You definitely are a warrior too!
      I’m so glad you think the poem is civil- I was hoping it would be though, this is exactly what I wish to say. Nothing more, nothing less. Thrilled to have you rooting for me.
      Have a lovely weekend, Cheryl. XXX

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  7. Sangbad Avatar

    A catharsis I can say…wonderful Smitha

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you, Sangbad. You described the writing perfectly. I’m so glad you think it’s OK to say so.

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      1. Sangbad Avatar

        Welcome…by the way if you can stop by Thoughts

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          I will, Sangbad. I’m trying to catch up on reading and I’m sorry I haven’t been reading as much as I’d like to. Going right now.

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  8. Manja Maksimovič Avatar

    Ohh, this is important, Smitha. Silence truly is a sin. I read this poem in your regal voice and could picture you in a regal attire easily. You are born for this!

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      He he…no wonder they say, ‘it’s important to have good friends’🤗😘. You are so supportive and you cheer so loud.
      I hadn’t imagined me in a regal attire😀 but after reading your comment,I am. And, I quite like it.;)
      I’m glad I got it all out. I needed to and I’m so glad you think it’s fine.

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  9. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Hi Smitha, I agree with the sentiment expressed in this poem 100%. Well done.

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    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Robbie, thank you for agreeing. It was an interesting prompt and writing the poem was cathartic. Would love to know, Robbie, who your alter-ego would be. Have you thought of it?

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      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

        HI Smitha, I have never thought about it. I can’t think of any person who I think is my alter-ego but maybe the ocean resembles my personality somewhat. I am very changeable, restless, and relentless, just like the sea.

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        1. Smitha V Avatar

          That’s interesting…’Restless and relentless,’ I see but I wouldn’t think of ‘changeable’ other than as in ‘adaptable.’
          It’s nice to think about it, right…kind of explains the way we think and so much of what we do. I agree on the ocean- you’re generous and ready to welcome all. X

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          1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

            HI Smitha, I think I meant changeable as in always a little different and colourful, like the changing hues of the sea. I am not a moody person, thankfully. It is interesting to think about it and I appreciate your kind words.

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            1. Smitha V Avatar

              That you definitely are- a ray of sunshine. It shows in everything you do and say, Robbie. I found it interesting too- kind of made me know a little more about myself.
              Wishing you a wonderful week ahead!

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