NaPoWriMo Day2023- Day 5: Grandma’s funeral

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Finally, here’s our (optional) prompt for the day. Begin by reading Charles Simic’s poem “The Melon.” It would be easy to call the poem dark, but as they say, you wouldn’t know what light is if you didn’t have darkness. Or vice versa. The poem illuminates the juxtaposition between grief and joy, sorrow and reprieve. For today’s challenge, write a poem in which laughter comes at what might otherwise seem an inappropriate moment – or one that the poem invites the reader to think of as inappropriate.

I’m not sure if this fits but this is the best I could do.

Grandma's funeral 
was rather surreal 
Dad was the only one who looked morose
Although there were others there, who were close.
'She was miserly and old 
And left behind so much gold,' 
disgruntled, I heard them say. 
But when they saw Papa, they 
clicked their tongue, shook their head 
and looked with downcast eyes, that appeared from crying, red.

Grandma lay on a bier, frozen 
awaiting her final journey to heaven 
We, dressed in whites, watched the funeral rites. 
When in came a kitten, 
and caught our attention. 
It made its way 
to where grandma lay-
dainty and white with eyes, lake green
It was the prettiest kitten I had seen  

All who sat watched
as, under the bier, the creature crouched. 
When my little sis squealed. 'It's Grandma. She's returned!' 
All heads turned 
towards the four-legged creature, 
momentarily forgetting they were there for Grandma's departure. 
Dad looked down 
with a frown 
and shooed the animal away; frightened, she scurried 
leaving everyone present, harried-  

they lifted their feet
as she crawled under their seat, 
creating a commotion
that had nothing to do with the cremation. 
My sister got down on all fours. 
Someone closed the doors and shouted, 'Don't let Grandma go'
'It's reincarnation, just so you know.' 
Dad turned around, his face sombre. 
He said, 'It's time to see off my mother.'  

Then turning to my sister, 
he said, 'Bring your grandmother home.'



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15 responses to “NaPoWriMo Day2023- Day 5: Grandma’s funeral”

  1. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    HI Smitha, I think this is really good. This challenge certainly stretches the mind, doesn’t it? Is you book on AMazon US yet?

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Robbie, it does and in all directions. I haven’t written poetry in a long time so, this is good exercise.
      My book should be out on kindle in a day or two. I’ll let you know, Robbie. I can’t wait for you to read it.

      1. robbiesinspiration Avatar
  2. rajkkhoja Avatar
    rajkkhoja

    Very nice story write and nice poem. Amazing words written in.

  3. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Oh, sweet! Good one, Smitha.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Ha ha… thanks so much,Punam.

  4. SelmaMartin Avatar

    Oh, my. Smitha. This fits, this fits so well. And they took Grandmama back home. Love it!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Oh, I was so uncertain if it did. Thanks, Selma, for letting me know it does. I’m so happy to know you enjoyed it. XXX

  5. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet Avatar

    Oh, Smitha, what a fascinating poem! I think your grandma would probably enjoy the poem. <3

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Cheryl, I’m so happy to know you enjoyed it. The prompt left me confused for the longest time. Also, I haven’t written poetry in a long time. So, your words are very encouraging. Well, I hope she forgives me for calling her ‘miserly’. Lol

  6. LuAnne Holder Avatar

    So many ways that last line could be taken. What a very interesting story poem.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Yes 🙂 and I’m glad you pointed it out. Thank you for reading the poem so attentively. I’m very happy to know you enjoyed reading it.

  7. barbaraturneywielandpoetess Avatar

    Wonderful story and so well poemed.

  8. Sonia Dogra Avatar

    Well Smitha, all I can say is that laughter did come at an inappropriate moment..well done!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Oh wow! Thank you so much, Sonia. I was so not sure. I hope my grandma forgives me, though 🙂 .

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