Tanka Tuesday: Snow Becomes Rain (February 19 – March 4) Usui 雨水/ Poila Falgun

Today, I have a string of haiku that I wrote over the last few days for a challenge on Facebook in addition to the syllabic poetry I wrote for the Tanka Tuesday challenge.
But before all of that there’s a poem that got published by Silverbirch Press, a few days ago. I had sent it to them many months ago and thought they had forgotten about it, so their email with the publication link came as a beautiful surprise. You can read my poem, ‘Kitchen Spices’ by clicking on this link. Here are a few stanzas-

The first time I tried to cook, I stared at my fingers
Then, I conjured Amma up—she in her starched cotton sari
Sitting on the kottemane her sari raised to the knee
Her legs parted on either side of the oralu kallu*

Mamma cooked well
But I liked Amma’s better
So what if she made only the local cuisine
Unlike Mamma, who could whip up a multicuisine feast at the drop of a     hat.

Now for the Tanka Tuesday challenge hosted by Colleen Chesebro. I’m going to try writing the Abhanga this week. ‘Abhanga is the original name given to a saint’s devotional poetry in the state of Maharashtra in India. The poet was Sant Tukaram. Abhanga are form are written in any number of 4-line stanzas with 6-6-6-4 syllables each. L2 and L3 rhyme.’ I used ‘Spring thaw’ as my kigo word. It could be replaced with Falgun which is a regional word for Spring and is celebrated in Bangladesh.

Pohela Falgun

Yellow blooms walk the street
Winds cradle melodies
fragrant with marigolds
Spring thaw (falgun*) welcomed

*Falgun – is the season of Spring in Dhaka.

People celebrate Pohela Falgun or the first month of Spring in Dhaka by dressing in shades of yellow and orange with flowers on their (women) hair. Cultural events are held around the city during this time. It’s quite a beautiful time in Dhaka. I’ve never seen the advent of a season being celebrated with so much love and gusto by one and all. I wish I could have shared more pictures of the celebrations but I’ve been stuck at home with the flu.

If you have some time then here are the haikus I had written for a challenge on Fb

Day 1:

Heavens in blue smile
Rose of Sharon flaunts her robes
Spring is at the door

@SmithaV

Day 2:

Winter’s on the threshold.
Spring, too. One’s entering, and the
other, leaving. Like you.

@SmithaV

Day 3

Throat aches. Eyes water.
Symptoms of the common cold
Or an empty nest
?

@SmithaV



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36 responses to “Tanka Tuesday: Snow Becomes Rain (February 19 – March 4) Usui 雨水/ Poila Falgun”

  1. Andrea Stephenson Avatar

    Some wonderful poems here Smitha, I enjoyed your poetic celebration of spring, as well as reading about the celebrations in Dhaka. But I really loved Kitchen Spices, I can still see your grandmother ‘dancing’ in my head – I love the vivid images and the way it connects your history and family.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Hi Andrea, the flowers add a color to this crowded, dusty city and they are such a welcome change to the place. I’m so happy to know you liked ‘Kitchen Spices’ and that you imagined my grandma. She was amazing in every way- strong and graceful, soft-spoken and kind. I loved that you could see her through the poem. XOXO

  2. ben Alexander Avatar

    Awesome Abhanga, Smitha! Your poem really brings out the vibe of Pohela Falgun in Dhaka, painting a vivid picture of the springtime festivities. Even though you’re feeling a bit under the weather, your words take us right into the bustling streets with all those yellow blooms and fragrant marigolds. Thanks for giving us a taste of such a cool tradition. Here’s to a quick recovery!

    ~David

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much, Ben, for your lovely comment. I’m happy you think so, and I’m glad that I could share a little about this country that so few are aware of.
      I’m feeling much better now except for a silly cough thanks to the dust here.

      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        I’m so glad to hear that <3

        Much love,
        David

  3. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    Beautiful poems, Smitha!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you, Yvette! 🙂

  4.  Avatar
    Anonymous

    A beautiful sequence!
    And the images are so interesting.
    Hope you have recovered!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you so much! Yes, I have except for a persistent cough. It would be nice to know your name. 🙂

  5. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    Oh no! You’re sick too, Smitha? I’m so sorry to hear that. Let’s get well together. 🙏🏻 I’m so proud of you for using kigo words in your haiku!!! You are a star. Fabulous work. 💖

  6. Marsha Avatar

    I loved the idea of walking yellow flowers, but I thought it was a metaphor before you shared the story and the picture. I also loved your story of your grandmother. I hope you feel better soon.

  7. Belladonna Avatar

    Beautiful poem!

  8. robbiesinspiration Avatar

    Beautiful poems, Smitha. It’s nice to see some local language in your poem.

  9. memadtwo Avatar

    The last poem is so poignant. And I love your cooking poem–so much love. (K)

  10. restlessjo Avatar

    Hope you’re better soon. It looks like a lovely celebration.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Jo. Yes… so much like the festivities you share in Algarve.

  11. msjadeli Avatar

    Positive energy infuses your poems. A real pleasure to read them, Smitha.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you! That’s huge, Lisa, and it is so satisfying to hear as a writer. You made my day❤️.

      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re most welcome and my pleasure <3

  12. Sonia Dogra Avatar

    Loved ‘Kitchen Spices’!

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks, Sonia! I’m glad to hear it.

  13. rajkkhoja Avatar
    rajkkhoja

    So beautiful Pohela Falgun Yellow flower pic. Very nice you sharing falgun ( spring) rhyme written poem. So beautiful written poem for kitchen spices Nice meaningful Haiku written you. Enjoy pohela falgun celebration. Beautiful all photos.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you! Glad you liked the post.

      1. rajkkhoja Avatar
        rajkkhoja

        You are most welcome,Smitha

  14. Edward Ortiz Avatar

    Wonderful photos and poetry.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thank you very much, Edward.

      1. Edward Ortiz Avatar

        You’re Welcome.

  15. Sadje Avatar

    Beautiful poetry Samitha. Love them all and the photos of the festival are so charming

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Sadje. It’s gorgeous how they all dress up. I wish I had more pictures to share with you. Hopefully, next time.🙂

      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re most welcome. Yes, I’d be looking forward to seeing pictures next year

  16. Dale Avatar

    Kitchen Spice was particularly lovely.
    And the other poems were wonderful, too.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Dale. ‘Kitchen spices’ was a tribute to my grandma.

      1. Dale Avatar

        It was quite lovingly evident.

  17. Darlene Avatar

    I love Kitchen Spices. Learning to cook from a grandmother is always special.

    1. Smitha V Avatar

      Thanks so much, Darlene. Yes, it is and it’s easier because they’re kinder and so full of love.

      1. Darlene Avatar

        That bond between a grandmother and a granddaughter is amazing.

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